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BehindMasksareSecretsUntold by ~hildegarde:iconhildegarde:



Last night was awesome, it felt so good
to have your lips patted onto mine
with your hands moving slowly to some body parts I can’t recognize
for I was too busy with the sweet taste of your tongue.
Up to this morning, I can still taste it.

Now,
we lay on the same bed we laid on last night
I love that soothing look in your eyes,
that sly smile on your lips
and I can’t help it
for it feels so right having you here with me.
I’m enjoying this secret of ours,
an untold story of forbidden love-making,
illicit feelings for each other,
a crime in the eyes of the self-righteous.
But who are they to judge us, my sweet?

We care of nothing but this love which we never knew how it started
and for all we know, we feel the same
No, nothing in this universe can stop us
We love and make love — the only things that make us go round
and round round round…
Aah…yes, this world is a better place doing the same things over and over.

No one knows,
not even your parents
or mine.
Friends and foes alike,
they never suspected us.
You’re such a splendid actor
and I bow down to your greatness
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Author's Comments

ah, yes... i love this one. ~ :heart:
sweet and revealing...
just the way lovers should be. :love:









~hildegarde :love:

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:iconzellorama:
I love this..remind me of my youth...

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:iconhildegarde:
ah...thank you so much for commenting. :love:

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i'm not nice; i'm not even the classic-sweet-girl that you think i am. and when you finally get the chance to penetrate my world,you'll find an erotic part of me. and you'll be surprised that i'm jaded & bitter. QUESTION: will you still love me?
:iconporkbarbecue:
lovely. the first stanza struck me the most!

"with your hands moving slowly to some body parts I can’t recognize for I was too busy with the sweet taste of your tongue."
:pointr:I know exactly what you mean..! it's like the blinding of closed eyes...can't explain :XD: ...and I have weakness for writers who pen stuff that can never be found in any book :XD:

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Do humans really need to know that?
Look at how far they've come without knowing.
-Serial Experiments Lain
:iconchubby-cheeks-10:
oh my.. this one's so sweet.. so well-written.. i love this one, girl... :)

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i dwell in my darkness...

member of ~Self-InjuryClub ~AngstPoetSociety *inblack-club *darkclub *snapefanclub ~bahayngfilipino
:iconhildegarde:
once again, i am speechless by your lovely comment...:love:
thank you. thank you. :bow: wow...:giggle:

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i'm not nice; i'm not even the classic-sweet-girl that you think i am. and when you finally get the chance to penetrate my world,you'll find an erotic part of me. and you'll be surprised that i'm jaded & bitter. QUESTION: will you still love me?
:iconhildegarde:
i am overwhelmed by your sweet comment! aww... :love: i feel so great. hehe, lumaki ung ulo ko ng kaunti. :lmao:

honestly, i seldom write stuffs na nagugustuhan ko din. and i consider this one as a master piece! :D

reminds me of my beloved. yes, my one and only. actually, hnd naman ganun ka-halay ang nasa isip ko...hmm, the theme. naka-focus ako dun sa theme... ^_^

again and again, thanks for the fave! ^_^

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i'm not nice; i'm not even the classic-sweet-girl that you think i am. and when you finally get the chance to penetrate my world,you'll find an erotic part of me. and you'll be surprised that i'm jaded & bitter. QUESTION: will you still love me?
:iconhildegarde:
btw, thanks for the fave.

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i'm not nice; i'm not even the classic-sweet-girl that you think i am. and when you finally get the chance to penetrate my world,you'll find an erotic part of me. and you'll be surprised that i'm jaded & bitter. QUESTION: will you still love me?
:icondillian:
.. is this based on true experience? err.. nevermind. It's a very nice and passionate poem. ;)

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Telepathic.... sonic waves.
:iconkenjie:
Yes, who are they to judge two people in-love? :D

Bakit nga ba sila ganun no? haay. Anyway, inay ang galing mo :D


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It's she, a dead leaf
who made autumn his life
spring, his eternal rest.

-Kristine "The modern patadyong"

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